The amount of drinkable water for people is decreasing. Why is this? What can be done?

✨ Do you want to improve your IELTS writing?
Decreasing
q
Add an article
the
show examples
uantity of drinking water has become a major area of concern around the world.
This
Linking Words
is primarily because people are misusing water on
a
Change the article
an
show examples
exponential curve.
However
Linking Words
,
this
Linking Words
serious
probelm
Correct your spelling
problem
problems
could be mitigated through
the
Remove the article
apply
show examples
public awareness.
This
Linking Words
essay will
intends
Change the verb form
intend
show examples
to analyze both aspects in detail with relevant examples.
Submitted by john on

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

Discover more tips in The Ultimate Guide to Get a Target Band Score of 7+ »— a book that's free for 🚀 Premium users.

What to do next:
Look at other essays: