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In some countries it is thought advisable that children begin formal education at four years old, while in others they do not have to start school until they are seven or eight. How far do you agree with either of these views?

#countries #children #education #four #years #school #seven #eight
Today
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e
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ducation system and it's structure is different everywhere and it is completely based on the Government and their policies. There are countries where school start at lower
age
 as
four
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it is at seven or
eight
 years. More or less, everywhere int the world school
life
 started between
four
 to
eight
 years. There are different opinions about it. Some
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 that primary
age
 is the best time to
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 them easily.
Smallonce
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Stallone
 can learn things very easily without stress with the help of
play schools
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. It
is
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also
 help them to change the perception about school and soon they realise that it is
also
 one the part of their daily
life
.
A
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 early push can help their parents to realise their problems and abilities. Formal
education
 at
age
 of
four
 makes their
life
 more
descipline
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discipline
disciplined
. They learn manners and quality behaviour easily which help them in their future
life
.
On the other hand
, seven to
eight
 years of
age
 is
also
 better for formal
education
 because primary
age
 with study makes their
life
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monotonous
.
Common
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 drawback in
e
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the
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ducation system is
taht
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that
 they try to fit every child into
s
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ame pattern at
lest
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 in developing and poor
Countries
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countries
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. Various
chidren
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children
 are nor good in
s
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the
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tudy but due to formal
education
 started at
e
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an
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arly
age
 makes them more
stressfull
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stressful
.
Hence
 I do not agree with
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dvice that children should begin formal
education
 at
four
 years old.
Their
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 is
h
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uge improvement required in study pattern. Children should learn
a
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rt of learning weather it
start
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 at
Four
 or
eight
 does not make any difference.
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