Teenagers in some nations work at jobs while they are still in school. Do you think it is a good idea for students to have jobs ? Use specific examples and reasons to explain your answer

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In
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contemporary era, due to increasing costliness, an expenditure of families are
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increasing and in
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, sometimes its become hard to cope with situations when there is only one earning hand in the whole family.
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why, nowadays, youngsters in many countries do part-
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jobs after their school timing to support the family.I believe that it's a good development but have some demerits as well. The
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and foremost is that most of the times, juveniles do part-
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jobs to support their parents and to pay their expenses especially when their parents are not able to pay a high amount of educational fees. It is the best way to tackle the hard situation, in
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, they become more mature and disciplined in
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, according to educationalists of the USA, off-springs who spend their leisure
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to helping their family in any way, always become a disciplined person and better citizens of the nation.
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, by doing part-
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jobs they get chance to inculcate new skills which may become their career path as in adulthood.Sometimes by doing a part-
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job
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they develop an interest in a particular
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which is substantially beneficial for them as people spend years to find their career path.
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, one of my cousin, who born and brought in Canada, started doing a part-
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job
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as a photographer during earlier, now he is an eminent photographer in his city.
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,by working with highly skilled professionals they get chance to learn business skills, money management which increase their analytic thinking and cognitive skills.
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, a part-
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job
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may hamper their study and health due to overburden if they spend more
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on the
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after school timings. After tiring from the
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, they must be not able to concentrate on their study and
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loss may give a detrimental impact on their mental health.
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, they may lose their feeling of being a child as they do not get
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to play and do their favourite activities.
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, according to psychologists, it's essential for children to spend some
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on activities they adore. The children who do temporary jobs, mostly become mature in early age, in
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loss of childish behaviour and grave feeling of distressed and disappointment of
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, they do not get
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to spend with family and siblings. To conclude,children who do part-
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work gain a lot of new skills, disciplined
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, in
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, a better human being who lives a balanced
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, it's vital to fix the hours of work not more than 4 hours in a day, so that they can make a fine balance in
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