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Every country should have a free health service, even if this means that the latest medical treatments may not be available through the service because they are too expensive. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Most of the countries
offer
 free
health
 services but they do not
offer
 the most expensive latest medical treatments.
However
, I believe that the
health
system
 should be advanced and free of cost to the people.
Firstly
, there are many countries who
offer
health
 care
system
 facilities but with
insurance
. As part of
insurance
 is quite expensive, which is unaffordable by everyone. If someone's family won't able to buy the
insurance
 for themselves or their family member than it's going to trouble them in future. Because in certain countries doctor's does not pay attention to the patient as the national
system
 allowed.
For example
, the USA is one of the countries, where to buy
insurance
 is a must for everyone. But I haven't seen any free medical services they typically
offer
 to the public
instead
 of normal
health
 checkup.
Although
 the country
system
 is well advanced and more technical.
On the other hand
, many countries, who
offer
 free
health
 services and medicines, they might have a poor
health
system
 in serving facilities.
For example
, in India, there is plenty of well-being centre's running their free services,
instead
 of having a poor
health
system
.
Nevertheless
, families are own responsible to buy their own
insurance
 or either
this
 is not necessary from the government end. So, what are the big advantages of having a free
health
 service, if it's not going to benefit the person, who is struggling with his own life for the illness? Inconclusion, If normal
health
 services being offered by the government for free
then
 the administration suppose to make some urgent steps to improve the structure and
also
 make it easier and modest for the people to get the advantages from out of these facilities.
Submitted by Neha Saini on

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