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To what extent is the use of animals in the scientific research acceptable.

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Introduction
In
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 era of
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 and development, it is impossible to imagine high-tech laboratory is possible to imagine without conducting their various important
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 on animals for the betterment of human beings and to quench their never-ending thirst of knowledge. Use of animals in the labs for experiments has always severely been opposed by many animal lovers which brought
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park to the topic- “whether to experiment
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animals in the labs on not”. I strongly opine in the favor of
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se of animals by scientists.
Body paragraph 1
One of the most compelling reasons why one should use animals in the
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 is because it is very cost-efficient (effective). Knowledge-seeking researchers can save themselves from hefty litigation charges that they could face if
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 was made wrong on a human body.
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, if a person died in wrong conduct of
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, many (legal) litigation would be charged against the scientist by the family manager of the deceased person as that deceased human would have many sentimental and social values to his/her family.
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, it is a wise act of using animals as test samples.
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, most of the test animals have a shorter
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 than humans. Due to their short
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, they tend to die sooner and what can be better utilization of their short
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 than using it to produce several
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-saving medicines for us? To illustrate, the natural death of a rat would never be counted as useless, if it was used by scientist to produce a cure for any deadly human disease. Though the
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 of their
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 is small, it could bring us huge benefit if it is used wisely for a better motive and for the betterment of human beings.
Conclusion
To summarize, it is very important to try samples of
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 on a living organism. Due to short
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 and less cost association, it is a very smart idea to use animals for the experiments in major
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 and I strongly stand for the same.

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