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In countries all over the world, the volume of road traffic is increasing at a faster rate than new roads are built. What are the causes of this problem? What are some potential solutions?

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Traffic
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 congestion has always been a nagging problem in many countries over the past few decades. Given that
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 issue has far-reaching effects, both individually and nationally, identifying the reasons behind it is key to finding potential measures. There
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 a number of reasons why
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 congestion is increasing faster than roads are built.
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overpopulation has been considered one of the primitive causes of the increasing
traffic
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, especially in big cities.
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, the number of citizens in Hochiminh
City
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, Vietnam, has increased significantly in recent years, entailing more accommodations required to house everyone, and
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, roads are not allowed to be widened even though more people are driving in the
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.
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as the quality of human life has been generally enhanced, cars and bikes become affordable, leading to a much higher number of vehicles on the streets. In fact, streets in many countries, including Vietnam, were originally built only for bikes, not for cars, which have been more commonly used recently.
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, there are numerous solutions to address the issue. Governments should prioritize
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 roads in densely populated areas and big cities which are usually congested. In fact, since these places accommodate the majority of the workforce and big businesses, the more convenient commutes may help boost the economy.
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,
city
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 officials can put restrictions on cars or other vehicles during peak hours.
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 would not only ensure lower road congestion but
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 propel residents to improve their health by walking. In conclusion,
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 the trend might be difficult to reverse, there are many actionable measures to address it. Coordination among governments and
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 officials plays an important role in making
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 less congested.

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task response
Ensure a clear and comprehensive analysis of the causes and potential solutions for the traffic congestion issue. Develop each point with relevant supporting details and examples to demonstrate a complete understanding of the topic.
coherence cohesion
Maintain a logical and coherent organization of ideas throughout the essay. Use appropriate transitional devices to link ideas and paragraphs effectively, ensuring that the essay flows smoothly and logically.
lexical resource
Expand the range of vocabulary used, incorporating more diverse and precise lexical choices to express ideas more accurately and effectively. This will enhance the overall quality of the essay.
grammatical range
Demonstrate a wider range of complex grammatical structures, incorporating varied sentence structures, verb forms, and punctuation to showcase a higher level of grammatical accuracy and sophistication.
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