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Immigration has a major impact on the society. What are the main reasons of immigration? To what consequences can it lead?

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One of the ways to upgrade the lifestyle which is increasingly becoming common is through immigration to another land. Many developed countries have now relaxed their foreign policies to welcome people from all over the world.
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 motivate people to consider shifting to a new place with the required infrastructure. Another key reason is education. Most of the developed nations have a renowned and affordable primary education system which becomes a key reason to migrate for the families which have children.
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one does not have to bear the cost of education till the age of 18. The inter global movement of people has a macro effect on the economies of both the participating countries. It can lead to depletion of skilled resources in one nation and the addition of talented workers in another country. Or it can convert a sparsely populated zone to a denser one. Eg. Many regions of Canada which were once deserted are now becoming thickly populated owing to the increasing influx of people in that area. Altogether, these inter global movements are helping people to upscale their lifestyle and live a more meaningful life in every part of the world. Their true impact can only be assessed in
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic migration
  • Asylum seeker
  • Diaspora
  • Expatriate
  • Refugee status
  • Work permit/visa
  • Demographic shift
  • Naturalization
  • Xenophobia
  • Cultural assimilation
  • Multiculturalism
  • Social cohesion
  • Immigration policies
  • Border control
  • Undocumented immigrants
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