Some people believe that studying at university or college is the best route to a successful career, while others believe that it is better to get a job straight after school. Do you agree or disagree?

Securing a well-paid career is everyone's dream. There are some people who think that it is better to be graduated from a tertiary institution in order to be employed while others advocate that start working immediately after elementary learning is paramount. In my opinion, the higher degree gives an upper hand to have reputed employment since

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already proves that the candidate is sufficiently equipped to work in a particular post. The

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and foremost fact is that when a job seeker with degree certificates would more likely to be hired as a person who has thorough knowledge in that field

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when compared to one who just passed

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econdary school.

In other words

, education itself shows how efficient

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potential employee is.

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, many international companies, their deployment is purely based on the academic background.

Therefore

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can be harmful to those who have only basic learning. Another fact is that even though it is possible to secure a job with minimum education, future career development can be slim since they did not have

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heoretical background.

Similarly

, the pay increment

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based on the position which they are in, it is unlikely to be counted the number of years they are in the field. The class-four worker,

for instance

, has many years of experience, but there is a huge difference in salary of his and a newly hired manager of the same organisation.

Thus

, advancement is strictly dealt with the level of qualifications. In conclusion, people have a different opinion on whether joining in a work-sector after a basic study or to be graduated before searching

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an occupation. I firmly think that a highly qualified job seeker can secure a better position than others. It is highly recommended that if you are planned to develop through a position, higher training is a must.