More and more people suffer from health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated by modern medicine. Some people think that a return to traditional medicine is warranted. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Nowadays, due to modern sedentary lifestyle and eating habits, people are facing various

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issues. To solve these issues, many individuals hold the view that traditional treatments may be the best as compared to the present medicines. I completely disagree

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statement which seems quite difficult.

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essay will discuss some issues faced by modern society with the best

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and my point of view as it progresses. To being with, It is undeniable fact that today, the lifestyle of the mass

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reater extent, with the sedentary workstyle and eating unhealthy food creates

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umber of

health

issues,

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as obesity, diabetes which ended up in heart attacks, cancers and

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hazardous diseases.

Therefore

, various medicines get failed to cure

such

health

problems.

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, people are claiming to treat these issues with

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traditional medicines. Since living style has been changed as compared to past, it seems hard to mitigate

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forementioned diseases without changing the way of life of people or to without adopting the heritage lifestyle.

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, as the development in the field of science and medicines, these days, doctors have more technology as well as more medicines facilities to save the life of patients.

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, due to the blessings of

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cientist, doctors can treat the cancer patient, and give them a

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life to live.

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lethora of skin problems and breathing problem has been seen in the present

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which was not even in the books of the doctors,

thus

, unquestionably, these cannot be solved by the traditional medicines. To

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,

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people argue that historic medicines can be considered more helpful to cure various

health

issues, I cannot

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it as the best solution to

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them as the living style is not same as the past.

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, more and best medicines and technology required for

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better results.