It is commonly believed that nowadays main factors that affect a child’s development are media, pop culture and friends. A different point of view is that family plays a significant role. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is argued that in current time, leading factors affecting a little one’s growth are peers, modern fashion and media, whereas, people having the other view reckon that family members have the most influential impact on the overall development of a child.

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, I believe that the former viewpoint is worth considering because society influences them the most. Children’s physical and mental development is mainly affected by their surroundings. When they go out of their houses, they meet different types of people. They normally make friends in order to share their personal problems, which they find difficult to share with anybody else. If they do so, they feel more relaxed and satisfied.

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, media platforms like television and pop art

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affect them deeply. When they start watching it, they not only see fashion trends but

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adopt the same in their lives. It is

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agreed that

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kinds of things add more to the advancement of human beings.

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, my nephew, who is a modern kid, is more intelligent as compared to the old generation kids and it is only due to the modern civilization and social media.

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, some people assert that the family plays the most indispensable role in the child’s development. They think that the

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school of toddlers is their own family because they learn by observing their parents. When a baby is born, he

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comes in the contact of his parents. Later on, he starts imbibing their qualities, whether they are good or bad.

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both mother and father are necessary for children, they cannot provide them with a wide atmosphere where children can explore more about the world. So, I disagree with

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opinion because the family alone cannot provide their kids with

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latform in which they can exaggerate their thoughts.

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, my cousin, who is an introvert and not allowed by his family to go out and enjoy with his friends, due to which, he is neither active nor intelligent. To conclude,

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family members are crucial in the life of an individual, social relationship,

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as friends, media and culture are more suitable for the growth of a child.