It is generally believed that some people are born with certain talents, for instance for sport or music, and other are not. However, it is sometimes claimed that any child can be taught to become a good sports person or musician. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays, children have faced a lot of
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on school and
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, so it is common some of them start to practice more sports or learn how to play an instrument.
However
, it is remarkable that for a few young people these activities are easier than for others.
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the discussion that some people are born with more
talent
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ave increased,
on the other hand
, a lot of people believe that every
person
can be taught to learn some exercises or instrument.
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artistic skill can be genetics because most of the young
person
who
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this
talent
have a parent who can play an
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instrument
or have
talent
in sports.
Also
, one fact is that since their childhood
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people have an example of how to play and
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unconsciously
they can learn something. We can notice that children who have grown up listening
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their parents or brothers playing some instruments can identify the notes more easily than a child that
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not have
this
experience.
On the other hand
, some people believe that every
person
could develop their artistic side of their brain. In fact,
this
is true. The human brain has the same capacity to learn for everyone, in some cases some people have more difficulty due to, some specific physical or mental issue.
However
, scientific studies prove that music and sports can help
then
to develop and have a better life. To summarize, I believe that each
person
have a
talent
and the example of their family can affect the artistic side of a young
person
. Indeed, everyone can learn some new sports or music instrument, but some have to practice more than others to be good
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that. In each case the sports and music can help and provide a better life, people do not need to be perfect on that, the important point is to enjoy and try to learn something new
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Innate talent
  • Nurture
  • Prodigy
  • Proficiency
  • Deliberate practice
  • Physiological factors
  • Grit
  • Perseverance
  • Cultural norms
  • Structured training
  • Physical predisposition
  • Natural aptitude
  • Dedicated training
  • Societal influence
  • Passion
  • Genetic endowment
  • Skill acquisition
  • Expertise
  • Extracurricular activities
  • Mastery
  • Cognitive abilities
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