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Some systems require students to specialise in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

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Some people in the
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enefits of both the views and why teaching students a wide
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 of few subjects can be taught to students till the age of fifteen.
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