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Some systems require students to specialise in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

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Some people in the
system
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ide
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enefits of both the views and why teaching students a wide
range
 of
subject
 better than the other. Specialization in a specific
subject
 gives a broad
knowledge
 in that field.Most of the students time and energy will be concentrated on these subjects.Basic
knowledge
 of few subjects can be taught to students till the age of fifteen.
For example
,Specializing in physics only can be very helpful for science as many theories and researches can be done in those time rather than focusing on unnecessary subjects.So,
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tudent should start focusing on limited subjects from the age of fifteen which can be beneficial for them.
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system
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ide
range
 of subjects.
This
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knowledge
 on many subjects.As they believe that
knowledge
 of one
subject
 can or might be required in another
subject
.So having
knowledge
 about many subjects can make that specific topic easy to understand.
For example
,the trigonometry chapter
that is
 taught in mathematics is required in physics to solve certain numerical.So,it is mainly required to study a wide
range
 of subjects. There
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ystem that
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 students to study
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ide
range
 of subjects whereas some
system
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imited
subject
.
This
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ide
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ubject is better as sometimes
knowledge
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subject
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subject
 and
this
 should continue until the school leaves.The students can be
then
 allowed to specialize in certain subjects.
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