Some systems require students to specialise in a limited range of subjects from the age of fifteen. Other systems require students to study a wide range of subjects until they leave school. What are the benefits of these two education systems and which is better?

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Some people in the
system
believes that students should be specialized in specific subjects from the age of fifteen, whereas some people require that students should be taught
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ide
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of subjects until they leave school.
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enefits of both the views and why teaching students a wide
range
of
subject
better than the other. Specialization in a specific
subject
gives a broad
knowledge
in that field.Most of the students time and energy will be concentrated on these subjects.Basic
knowledge
of few subjects can be taught to students till the age of fifteen.
For example
,Specializing in physics only can be very helpful for science as many theories and researches can be done in those time rather than focusing on unnecessary subjects.So,
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tudent should start focusing on limited subjects from the age of fifteen which can be beneficial for them.
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,
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system
believes that students should be taught
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ide
range
of subjects.
This
helps students to have quite
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knowledge
on many subjects.As they believe that
knowledge
of one
subject
can or might be required in another
subject
.So having
knowledge
about many subjects can make that specific topic easy to understand.
For example
,the trigonometry chapter
that is
taught in mathematics is required in physics to solve certain numerical.So,it is mainly required to study a wide
range
of subjects. There
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ystem that
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students to study
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ide
range
of subjects whereas some
system
wants students to specialize in
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subject
.
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essay discussed that benefits of both the views.I believe that teaching
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ubject is better as sometimes
knowledge
of one
subject
can put to use in another
subject
and
this
should continue until the school leaves.The students can be
then
allowed to specialize in certain subjects.
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