Nowadays youngsters have additional responsibilities compared to
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ast. Some argued that it has a positive development rather than
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egative outcome and others think the opposite. In my opinion
it has
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it of both throughout
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essay I will explain why.
In
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odern world
children have been more responsible than past have a good outcome because it
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them to be independent. In many countries by age of 15 or 16 young adults have part-time jobs to
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most of their needs. So they don’t have to depend on
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arents.
As a result
of
this
society will have self-confident adults.
For example
, my cousin who lives America started his career at
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ery young age and with his experiences opened his own café when he was 23.
Thus
, young adults been extra responsible has a positive growth because it helps them to be self-standing adults in the future.
On the other hand
, children having additional liabilities at
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ery young stage have negative development since it might affect their mental health.
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decades back we have
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reedom to enjoy our childhood to the fullest. We did not take any authority when we were young. But these days because of not having a proper childhood experience young generation suffering from depression and other mental health issues.
For instance
, a survey done in London University found out that 75%
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children suffering from various mental disease due to not having better boyhood/girlhood.
Hence
, been responsible at
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arly age have negative growth as it
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little ones physiological health.
To sum up, even though young adults growing up with many responsibilities have some positive effect
such
as been independent and self-confident, there is a risk of creating a mental illness at
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ater stage of their lives.