Foreigners have a tendency to live in the rural area. Give the pros and cons of this and relevant exapmles to support.

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Globalization is a process which gives an opportunity for migration to other countries. Nowadays, foreigners have a tendency to live in a rural space. That essay will focus on the advantages and disadvantages of that trend. On the one hand, living in a rural operation has benefits

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as economy of money and relaxing from living in the city.

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, the cost of some products higher than in the rural field.

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the all goods in that area affordable.Getting a hotel in the centre of the city and eat out in prestigious can quickly make a huge dent in the tourists’ holiday budget.

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if a visitor will travel in a guesthouse with a local family, it will cost lower. The food

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will be cheaper because of the availability of fresh food from the farm.

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, a person can relax. Living in megapolis is annoyed and may cause stress. While in a rural operation has a fresh atmosphere, slow-paced lifestyles and have a chance to get close to nature.

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, the suburban range has a drawback as a misunderstanding between citizens and visitor,

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the low quality of medicine. The language barrier is one problem that foreigners may encounter. Most of the rural areas do not have a good education so local people in the rural field rarely have any access to foreign languages.

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, facilities in the rural area are not well developed. Hospitals are hard to find and are not equipped with modern instruments and infrastructure, which is dangerous since foreigners are easily subject to diseases due to changing weather condition. What’s more, if foreigners forget to bring some regular grocery supplies

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as a toothbrush or clothe, they will have to go miles as there are very few shops in the vicinity. To sum up, living in a suburban operation has upside and downsides

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the advantages overweight the disadvantages.

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Foreigners have a tendency to live in the rural area. Give the pros and cons of this and relevant exapmles to support.

Some people believe that children should attend extra classes after school while some disagree. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.

Improvement in health, education and trade are essential for the development of poorer nations. However, the governments of richer nations should take more responsibility for helping the poorer nation in such area. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries. What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation?

Computer and A.I.technology are increasingly being used for online education. Can artificial intelligence enchance the learning experience? Is this a positive or negative or negative development?