Some people think climate change has a negative impact on business, while others think that it provides more business option. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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On the one hand, it has increased the biodiversity in many countries. Linking Words
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a result, the kingdom's economy rapidly increased. Correct word choice
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Consider adding more varied and detailed examples to support your points. For instance, when discussing how climate change impacts businesses, you could look at specific sectors beyond agriculture and tourism.
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Try to develop your ideas more thoroughly. Instead of briefly touching on points, delve deeper into how climate change affects businesses and why certain sectors might benefit or suffer.
coherence cohesion
Work on refining the logical structure of your paragraphs. Transition phrases and connectors can help to make your argument more fluid and easier to follow.
introduction conclusion present
The essay has a well-defined introduction and conclusion, which frames the discussion nicely.
complete response
The essay addresses both views on the topic and provides a personal opinion, making it a comprehensive response to the prompt.
relevant specific examples
The essay uses specific examples, such as the situation in KSA and companies like Aramco, which helps to illustrate the points being made.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.
‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.
Examples:
I really want to study but I’m too tired.
I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.
If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.