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The threat of nuclear weapons maintains world peace. Nuclear power provides cheap and clean energy. The benefits of nuclear technology far outweigh the disadvantages. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge or experience.

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Undoubtedly, nuclear
energy
 is the cheapest and cleanest
energy
 source available to mankind.
However
, like any other
energy
 source
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,
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it has advantages and disadvantages.
To begin
 with, nuclear
energy
 can be utilized in producing electricity. Unlike other fossil fuels which when burnt, emits hazardous gasses, nuclear
energy
 does not.
Furthermore
, when carefully exploited it can help in curing dangerous diseases
such
 as cancer, polio, Alzheimer's, etc.
In addition
, it is
also
 believed to prevent world-war as nations are aware of nuclear power's disastrously havocs,
although
 its dangerous mishaps can not be neglected. The best example is the Hiroshima and Nagasaki incident which wiped out generations and is still affecting the people living in Japan and neighbouring countries. I strongly disagree that nuclear
energy
 benefits surpass its drawbacks. To add another demerit, there is no proper system to safely release radioactive waste from nuclear power resources. Factories and manufacturing units disseminate their hazardous waste into nearby rivers and air, contributing to another pressing issue of pollution. To conclude, without a safe and systematic plan for utilizing nuclear
energy
, it will always be more of a peril than being useful.
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  • Mutually assured destruction
  • Greenhouse gases
  • Cost-effective
  • Radiation therapy
  • Proliferation
  • Rogue states
  • Radioactive waste disposal
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