In the modern world, it is possible to shop, work and communicate with people via the Internet and live without any face-to-face contact with others. Is it a positive or negative development?

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has changed after the invention of computers and

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nternet. Nowadays it is easy to

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and do shopping through

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nternet without any physical interaction. I personally believe there

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both positive and negative outcome in

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I will discuss it. Working, communicating with people and buying things online have a good development because it is convenient. Rather than walking from store to a different store to purchase stuff, you can search online and buy it.

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items will be delivered to

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oorstep.

Therefore

it is

cost saving

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and

time saving

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.

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, during the COVID 19 pandemic

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I was unable to go

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shopping for my husband’s birthday. But I was able to buy stuff online.

Thus

, working or buying things via cyberspace is beneficial because of the convenience.

On the other hand

, while you doing your duties or dealing with people only via

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nternet is a poor choice because it may lead you to mental illness. Due to only using electronic devices there

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less human interaction and

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people will be mentally sick.

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, a survey done by Melbourne University found out that, 75%

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people who use

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nternet to

work

and communicate are suffering from depression.

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work

and dealing with clients with

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et have a negative growth because of the chances of suffering from mental health issues. To sum up,

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, shopping and living without and face to face contacts with society

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a positive growth for the reason of convenience. On the flip side, it has negative development since it may lead to mental health problems.