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Some high school students work part-time in addition to going to school. What are the advantages and disadvantages of high school students having part-time jobs? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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Working in a
part
-
time
 job may be one of the most difficult
condition
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 for high
school
 students. These students are primarily responsible for their courses in the
school
. They have to study hard in order to pass their exams. So, it
also
 takes a long
time
 in their daily
life
. There are a few advantages and disadvantages of high
school
 students having
part
-
time
 jobs. If a high
school
student
 works
part
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part-time
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time
, they have limited
time
 to study his/her courses. So, that may lead the
student
 to fail the exams.
In addition
, his/her social
life
 affects negatively because of having no free
time
. Nutrition habits may
also
 change and that may cause serious health problems.
For example
, when I was in high
school
, there was a
student
 in my class. He had been working
part
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time
 after
school
time
. After a while, his exam results dramatically decreased and
then
 he got sick. That period was so bad for him.
On the other hand
, there are some advantages to work in a
part
-
time
 job while you are a high
school
student
. One of the biggest advantages is to earn money. When a person earns money
in
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 early ages, he/she could gain an incredible experience about real
life
.
Although
 they have a lot of problems when working
part
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part-time
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time
, their gain is so crucial for them over their
life
.
Consequently
, there are some advantages and disadvantages to
work
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working
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part
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part-time
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time
 for high
school
 students. I think
the
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students should not work during their
school
life
. Because
,
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 the advantages of
that is
 much more than the advantages.
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