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Some think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?

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Some people believe that a
country
's success
soley
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solely
 depends on its economic
growth
 but others believe there are other factors that contribute to
create
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 a successful
country
.
This
 essay will discuss
about
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two main factors that contribute to a growing
economy
 and discuss whether
one
 factor is the key when compared to others. Apart from having a growing
economy
,
education
 is
one
 of the major factors in deciding a county's
growth
. Without proper
education
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,
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there will be less educated generation and because of
that pathways
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that pathway
those pathways
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 to innovation, talented workforces can be limited.
Also
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the
decision making
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 processes can be affected.
Moreover
,
h
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ealth of the population of a
country
 is another key that helps to
imrpove
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improve
 an
economy
. The well-being of the workforce is important as the
economy
 depends on them.
For instance
, Sri Lanka has been a
thrid-world
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third-world
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country
 for over seventy years because
its
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 governed by uneducated people and according to a survey 85% of
workfoce
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workforce
 called in sick over
over
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50 days or more per year.
Thus
 proper
education
 and better healthcare are important for
a
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the
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 economical success of a
country
.
As
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apply
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I believe, a single
criteria
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criterion
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 cannot create a successful
country
. Economic
growth
,
education
, health care, all these factors contribute equally to a
country
's success.
For example
, Israel is
one
 of the leading countries in terms of
successand
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success and
 if you dig
deeply
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 you will find out that all three
affromentioned
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aforementioned
 factors have
conbtributed
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contributed
 equally to the
growth
 of Israel.
Hence
,
one
 factor cannot create a successful
country
. To sum up, a growing
economy
 can be a major
facotr
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factor
 in deciding a
country
's
growth
 but
theere
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there
 are other factors
such
 as
education
 and healthcare which
also
 equally contribute to
a
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growth
 of a
country
.
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