Some think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?

Some people believe that a

country

's success

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solely

depends on its economic

growth

but others believe there are other factors that contribute to

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a successful

country

.

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two main factors that contribute to a growing

economy

and discuss whether

one

factor is the key when compared to others. Apart from having a growing

economy

,

education

is

one

of the major factors in deciding a county's

growth

. Without proper

education

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there will be less educated generation and because of

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to innovation, talented workforces can be limited.

Also

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the

decision making

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processes can be affected.

Moreover

,

h

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ealth of the population of a

country

is another key that helps to

imrpove

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improve

an

economy

. The well-being of the workforce is important as the

economy

depends on them.

For instance

, Sri Lanka has been a

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country

for over seventy years because

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governed by uneducated people and according to a survey 85% of

workfoce

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workforce

called in sick over

over

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50 days or more per year.

Thus

proper

education

and better healthcare are important for

a

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economical success of a

country

.

As

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I believe, a single

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cannot create a successful

country

. Economic

growth

,

education

, health care, all these factors contribute equally to a

country

's success.

For example

, Israel is

one

of the leading countries in terms of

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success and

if you dig

deeply

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you will find out that all three

affromentioned

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aforementioned

factors have

conbtributed

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contributed

equally to the

growth

of Israel.

Hence

,

one

factor cannot create a successful

country

. To sum up, a growing

economy

can be a major

facotr

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factor

in deciding a

country

's

growth

but

theere

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there

are other factors

such

as

education

and healthcare which

also

equally contribute to

a

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growth

of a

country

.