Some think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?

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Some people believe that a

country

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's success

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depends on its economic

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but others believe there are other factors that contribute to

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a successful

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two main factors that contribute to a growing

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and discuss whether

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factor is the key when compared to others. Apart from having a growing

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education

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one

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of the major factors in deciding a county's

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. Without proper

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there will be less educated generation and because of

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ealth of the population of a

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is another key that helps to

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improve

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. The well-being of the workforce is important as the

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depends on them.

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for over seventy years because

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governed by uneducated people and according to a survey 85% of

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economical success of a

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cannot create a successful

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. Economic

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education

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, health care, all these factors contribute equally to a

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of the leading countries in terms of

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success and

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factor cannot create a successful

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can be a major

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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Grammatical Range: 4.0

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Some think that economic progress is completely dependent on the country’s success, while others believe that other factors are also important. What are the different factors contributing to the success of a country? Do you believe that only one factor is important, compared to others?

Your opinion

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These days Internet-based courses have become a popular alternative to university-based courses. Some students prefer this type of learning because they do not need to attend lectures. Others argure that it is important to study at university. Discuss both these views and give your opinion.

Today, many people use the internet and smartphones to transfer money to friends, family, and businesses. Is this a positive or negative development?

Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned, while others believe that people should be free to do any sports or activities. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.