Some cities create extra housing by building tall buildings. Other cities do this by building on wide areas of land. Which do you think is the best solution to the problem of housing?

While some cities prefer to build tall houses, others create buildings by doing it on wide areas of

land

. Personally, I opine that the high-rise building should be preferred since

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can preserve nearby

land

for other uses and spend less

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daily trips. Today’s cities grow rapidly and require more

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for new buildings and infrastructure.

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is because a large number of people prefer

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stay

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in megacities due to opportunity and facilities,

such

as education ,work and entertainments provided by

such

places. By building more skyscrapers, the surrounding area can be preserved or used in another way.

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, pristine natural lands can be designated as national parks or if the city requires more food to feed its population, there could be proximately located farms with fast delivery times .To illustrate, there is a gripping National Park in the New York

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among a huge number of high-rise buildings. Another point to consider is that tall buildings usually concentrated in city centres with well-developed public transport.

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gives citizens a golden opportunity to save their

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for habitual

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and

this

is the key to

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ore convenient life. If it were not high-rise houses with more numbers of

appartments

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apartments

, less number of people would

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afford

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live with better conditions,

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as common transport for saving their

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. According to London Researching Group in University, average European citizen, who lives in remote areas with wide houses, spend three hours per day for

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rip to work and to back home. In conclusion, I am convinced that the best solution to the problem of housing is building tall buildings.

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is because not only preserve nearby

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for other uses

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but

also

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an opportunity to saving people’s

time

.