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Pressure on the school and university students is increasing and students are pushed to hard work when they are young. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

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Schools and colleges are considered to play an important role in an individual's life.
However
, with
this
 growing population the competition is
also
 increasing, thereby resulting in increased strain on students. It has its advantages and disadvantages,
this
 essay tends to delve into both the perspectives in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin
 with, the students these are being pushed to be diligent against their will at
such
 a young age due to tremendous increase in competition.
This
 has resulted in many students experiencing depression and anxiety as
this
 tension is a lot to absorb for them. They might end up losing interest and not taking their studies seriously.
In addition
 to
this
, it could result in students studying the whole day without getting any free time for extracurricular activities and self-growth leading to a dull, sedentary lifestyle.
However
, with
this
 stress is preparing the students for the long run by giving them a glimpse of the struggle and hard work required in the actual world.
This
 makes them understand that not everything gets served to us on a silver platter and we have to push our limits to achieve certain things in life.
Furthermore
, it
also
 prepares students for the hustling that awaits in the
further
 parts of their life as it is said:"success is no accident, It is hard work, preserving, studying and loving what we do." In conclusion, I pen down saying that, the positive effects exceed the negative ones.
Thus
, it can be concluded that the increasing pressure on the students studying in schools and colleges has more positive development rather than negative development.
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