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Nowadays, adults do little exercise. Some people believe that the best way to address this issue is by covering great sports events such as the Olympics on television. Others think that it is more beneficial to take other measures. What is your opinion?

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It is true that your health is your wealth. In the modern world,people believe that broadcasting world-famous sports event,
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ricket world cup, Olympics and tennis tournament will encourage grown men and women to do more workouts.
However
, I believe there are better solutions to solve
this
 matter namely
Firstly
, educating the older generation with an information campaign about the benefits of exercises would be a better option. Mostly nowadays people are not aware of their well-being and no interest in working out. Government and other individual parties can organize
such
 invents and that could encourage society to do more activities.
For example
, a survey done in Sri Lanka found out 60% of adults increased their level of
fitness
 after some information campaigns.
Thus
, I believe conducting information seminars about
fitness
 and health is more beneficial than telecasting major sports events on media.
On the other hand
,reducing gym membership prices and offering good discount packages would help to attract people to do more
fitness
 activities. It is common that everybody cannot afford the price of strength centres. It is better to offer family packages or group packages for affordable prices.
For instance
,
last
 year my husband and I joined with snap
fitness
 because they promoted a couple
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package and a group of HIIT workout sessions for a reasonable price.
Hence
, it is more appropriate to discount gym membership and offer various packages to attract people to do exercise. To sum up, rather than telecasting big sports events in mass media to encourage people to do physical activities, it can be more productive to educate people about benefits of physical well-being and offer discounts in
fitness
 centres.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • high-profile
  • public awareness campaigns
  • gym memberships
  • workplace initiatives
  • government policies
  • tax incentives
  • local community events
  • physical activity
  • accessibility
  • motivation
  • successful athletes
  • broadcasting
  • inspire
  • subsidies
  • regular exercise
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