Car ownership has increased so rapidly over the past thirty years that many cities in the world are now 'one big traffic jam'. How true do you think this statement is? What measures can governments take to discourage people from using their cars?

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Advancements in the 4-wheeler-vehicle industry, mainly comprising of cars,
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as reducing the
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to own a
car
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and increasing in-
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safety measures have made it much easier for an individual to opt-in for a
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rather than depending on the public
transport
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.
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ncrease in the number of cars, on the road,
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an alarming rise in the number of traffic jams in the city. Over the years, in efforts to make cars substantially cheaper and safer, engineers and
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manufacturers have invested a lot of money to ensure every person can fulfil their dream of owning a
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. In reality,
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, it has been noticed that a middle-class person who has, in the past, relied on either public
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or 2-wheelers can now easily own/finance a
car
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.
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, since the
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decade, city roads face numerous traffic jams on a daily basis while the use of public
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or bikes have reduced drastically. These effects cause more money to the
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as additional infrastructure has to be added to the highways and,
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in pollution
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has to be countered. To avoid these detrimental changes, the
government
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needs to place strict policies on
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production and, takes steps to make public
transport
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appear more compelling to the general public.
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, introducing new vehicle taxes will
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the
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to own and maintain a
car
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, on one hand, will bring down the average sales of cars and, on the other, provide the
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with additional tax money which can be
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used to improve and reduce the
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of public
transport
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. In my opinion,
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manufacturers are reducing the costs of owning a
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year after year and, to counter
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, the
government
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can introduce taxes to
increase
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the
cost
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of 4-wheelers while
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improve on alternatives to a
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,
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as public transportation, bikes and, bicycles.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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