The prison system has not been effective at reforming criminals. A large number of convicted felons return to committing crimes soon after being released. What are the problems with the prison system and what solution can you recommend to address this issue?

In recent years,the prison system has not been helpful in changing criminal attitude of sinners

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of which most of them return to jail by committing

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crimes.

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essay addresses the problems of the current jail system and the solutions to rectify it.

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with,prisoners confront bad experiences at lockups of which the

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one being, jailers attitude, they behave in a very rough manner. As well as the quality of food being served

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seems to be too poor. Both of these forms a negative impact on the culprit.

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, most of the jails isolate lock-uppers on the basis of the crime committed,

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convicts end up in a gloomy state without any more communications.

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, when a policeman repeatedly ill-treats the

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for no reason, he feels irritated and angry believing that the entire society will behave only at

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manner

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tempting him to do more crimes. In the other hand, there are many good solutions for these problems.

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overnment must ensure police staff doesn't torture the sinned person and

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better quality of food is served. In continuation with

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, all crime doers must routinely attend education classes on moral lessons and be encouraged to attain certain skills.

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overnment should provide them with employment opportunities to enhance better living standards that would prevent them from doing

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offences. For instances, there was an article about a prisoner recently, who learnt hair cutting at

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ail and opened a

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as soon as he was released. It became viral news as his saloon was a recommended one on the city. In conclusion, the present lock-up policies

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alter criminal behaviour in general rather inspire them to perform more.

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is due to the unpleasant situation they face at jails and

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can be improved when governments make sure policemen

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a good feeling towards

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crime figures

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to providing them with new opportunities.