Do you think the benefits of living and working in a foreign country are more than drawbacks?

Since the
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few decades, the trend of migrating to different
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for
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a better
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lifestyle has been escalating.
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while
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staying
in
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abroad
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people
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, people
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may face cultural and linguistic challenges, despite these hurdles,
one
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could avail the option of multiple career opportunities and personal growth. In my opinion, it is far more advantageous to live and
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in foreign
countries
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, rather than the barriers
people
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inevitably face. There are numerous benefits of considering the opportunity to stay away from
one
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's own nation
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, more employment options and
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a chance
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to grow as a
person
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. Because
while
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living in
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different
nations
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nations,
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one
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could select
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job
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one
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's own requirements
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such
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, such
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as
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job
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jobs
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, well-paying professions and so on.
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, the probability of
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's personal growth could increase as working with multinational companies enables the
person
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to manage
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priorities and
to
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learn
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new skills in order to upgrade
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knowledge.
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,
according to
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some recorded instances,
people
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who opt the other nations of the world for
work
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are quite motivated and skilful
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than their performance, when they were in their own country.
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, abroad plays a pivotal role
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people
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as
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person
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along
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, along
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with offering them skilled
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. In spite of the various merits, there are some limitations of foreign
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which
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be ignored.
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, in a new country,
people
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may face cultural and linguistic obstacles
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. If
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they have to initiate their talk, it is required to use the language that
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person
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could know
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. It is a provided fact that many
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have
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not familiar with the foreign language of that particular country
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, and
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consequently
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they feel
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of confidence
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, and
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simultaneously
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's own cultural extinction is considered to be its negative consequences.
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, when my brother was in Japan and during his
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stay,
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he faced several difficulties in terms of communication barriers and
difference
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differences
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in norms and values.
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, these disadvantages of working and staying in different
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could discourage
people
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.
To conclude
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, it is a trend that
people
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tend to choose different regions in order to pursue their
work
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and life. Even though
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this
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massive shift has several negative outcomes
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, including
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cultural heritage and the language differences
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however
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,
this
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small loss could be mitigated as these are worth the gains it offers.

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structure
Plan before you write. Put one main idea in the intro and two to three clear points in the body. End with a short conclusion that restates the view.
grammar
Use simple grammar. Check each sentence to have a clear subject and verb. Fix phrases like 'in abroad' and 'abroad' to be correct.
content
Give more real and clear examples to back each point.
coherence
Use linking words but keep them simple. Use first, also, then, but, so, therefore to show flow.
lexis
Choose easy words. Do not use long or hard words. This helps the mark for vocabulary.
structure
The essay has a clear plan with an intro, body, and conclusion.
content
It discusses both sides and ends with a view.
Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 250 words in writing task 2. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long essay will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 260 to 290 words in writing task 2. This will ensure a concise essay and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 40 minutes to write the essay and you need around 10 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long essay in 30 minutes.

Topic Vocabulary:
  • quality education
  • high standard of living
  • diverse cultures
  • strong healthcare system
  • career advancement
  • safe and stable environment
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