Covid 19 may be a catastrophe for human beings but a therapy for mother nature. Discuss both views and give your opinion

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It is an irrefutable fact that

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pandemia is affecting all the countries' popultation in the entire world. More than ever, every day a lot or persons are dying due to Coronavirus. In the one hand, humanity is living a devastation. By the other hand, some people think that the planet is having a rest from human activities. The following up paragraphs will analyze some explanations. After that I will give my personal opinion and recommendations or predictions in

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issue.

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, It is well known that,

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is not the

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time that people is living a viral contagious.

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: In the prehispanic history of Mexico, the Spandiards conquer the Aztecs because they brought to America, virus that where strange for the Mexicas and most of the Mexica population got death.

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, Spanish conquer the Aztec Empire. Currently, it is happening the same

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now we can protect our selves with specificactions when we go out or following the "Stay home" program

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, nature has to create a balance.

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: If a group of animals is overpopulated, it can be seen that out of the blue, these animals start to get sick and

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die.

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why some scientist believe that

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is happening now to humanity. To sum up, viral contagious is not something new. An equilibrium from nature is required now a days. In my opinion,

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pandemia is exagereted and it is responding to another kind of interests that common people do not know.

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situation is controled by powerful groups, that maybe are developing

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, in order to control the human race.

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