You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter - describe the training course you want to do – explain what the company could do to help you – say how the course will be useful for your job

Dear Mr Brown, I am writing
this
letter to express my intention to pursue a training course in Migration techniques, which will be held
next
week at their office premises. To my surprise, a team of experts from a well-known company Google is coming to deliver the sessions.
This
course will explain a myriad of techniques used in data migration from outdated systems to new systems with advanced technologies. I am an active member of the tech group;
therefore
, I received an email to attend the program
on
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a discounted price.
Although
I have received an offer, still the program fee is too much for me to pay.
Thus
, I would request you to please consider my
all
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hard work and dedication to upskill myself, and provide your approval for the reimbursement of the course fee upon successful completion of the program. I am certain that
this
will help in serving our customers in a better way. Because nowadays everyone is migrating to
the
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cloud technology and we are
also
getting most of the
project
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to work on the cloud platform. In
this
case,we would have someone to take the requirements and commit them
about
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the possibilities, which would
further
help us in creating a success story. I would highly appreciate your immediate attention to
this
. I will be looking forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Prakash
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