A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was important how the book helped you.

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Dear Raman, I hope

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letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I want to thank you for helping me out by giving me the book

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Basics of Bio-Chemistry by Neelima Malik for a class presentation on Cell Structure.

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task was a part of

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exams.

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, I was a little nervous too,because I could not

attended

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the lectures on

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topic, as I was absent from college

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some personal issues. When

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topic was

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allowed

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to me and

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told me how important

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presentation

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for finals from

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onwards I was under immense pressure to perform well in the task to score good marks in exams. The book that you gave me helped me a lot to understand the topic in detail and I was able to understand the functioning of a cell.

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, the language used in the book was

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very easy to understand and that helped me to deliver my lecture with confidence. In the end, I would again like to thank you for your help and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

mrsdnsFri Oct 18 2024

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider structuring your letter into clearer paragraphs to enhance clarity. You could begin a new paragraph when you transition from discussing the presentation to expressing gratitude for the book.

Task Achievement

While your letter is well-written, ensure consistency in formality throughout the text. The expression 'from then onwards I was under immense pressure' could be simplified slightly for better natural flow.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your greeting and closing are well-crafted, which contributes to a polite and professional tone.

Task Achievement

The letter provides a complete response to the task, addressing all the points effectively.

Task Achievement

The language used is generally appropriate and clear, making the letter easy to understand.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

192 words

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