A colleague gave you a book which you used for your presentation. Write a letter to your colleague. In your letter, you should say: what the presentation was about, why the presentation was important how the book helped you.

Dear Raman, I hope

this

letter finds you in best of the spirits and radiant health. I want to thank you for helping me out by giving me the book

named

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Basics of Bio-Chemistry by Neelima Malik for a class presentation on Cell Structure.

This

task was a part of

annual

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exams.

Therefore

, I was a little nervous too,because I could not

attended

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the lectures on

this

topic, as I was absent from college

due to

some personal issues. When

this

topic was

alloted

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allowed

allocated

allotted

to me and

tutor

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told me how important

this

presentation

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was

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for finals from

then

onwards I was under immense pressure to perform well in the task to score good marks in exams. The book that you gave me helped me a lot to understand the topic in detail and I was able to understand the functioning of a cell.

Moreover

, the language used in the book was

also

very easy to understand and that helped me to deliver my lecture with confidence. In the end, I would again like to thank you for your help and I am looking forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Jatinder.

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Coherence and Cohesion

Consider structuring your letter into clearer paragraphs to enhance clarity. You could begin a new paragraph when you transition from discussing the presentation to expressing gratitude for the book.

Task Achievement

While your letter is well-written, ensure consistency in formality throughout the text. The expression 'from then onwards I was under immense pressure' could be simplified slightly for better natural flow.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your greeting and closing are well-crafted, which contributes to a polite and professional tone.

Task Achievement

The letter provides a complete response to the task, addressing all the points effectively.

Task Achievement

The language used is generally appropriate and clear, making the letter easy to understand.

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6 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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