Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?

In the midst of globalisation and industrialisation, the amount of dirt being exhaled
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is appalling. There are many
easons
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reasons
, as to why
this
is a frequent occurrence and the imperative role of the authorities worldwide in countering
this
, is a moot one. Let us discourse on the same below. There are many reasons behind the increase in the production of rubbish throughout the world.
Firstly
, the ever increase of population of the humankind has contributed to a mammoth share of the trash. The number of people has always been directly proportional to the volume of rubbish being produced from the time immemorial.
Secondly
, the industrial revolution, that shook the earth a decade ago, is considered the sole culprit in the production of industrious
waste
onto earth’s surface. Again the number of industries and factories contributing to
this
menace is on a steep climb, since its inception.
Thirdly
, the population rise has led to more transport system around the world, owing to an increase in the
waste
produced by
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vehicles and other means of transport. To cite an example from the part of the world I live, the discarded parts of cars,
such
as a blotted tire, is ubiquitous, compared to the past.
Finally
, the sheer negligence from us, with regards to the recycling of
waste
products has led to adding more chaos to the present scenario. No care, what so ever, was taken in the production of biodegradable products, so as to mitigate the amount of trash produced! The role of the authorities in combating the issue is inevitable. They should be imposing restrictions on the above-discoursed factors, favouring
waste
segregation. Population check, of governments on their respective states, should be made mandatory. The industries and factories should be restricted and monitored for the effective recycling or biodegradation of their
waste
produced. The amenities used by mankind,
such
as transport should be made more efficient and effective in terms of discarded residual
waste
. Building eco-friendly homes should be encouraged. More emphasis should be made on the recycling of all the industrial trash being produced o an emergency basis. The government should focus more on the fact that these are either biodegradable or can be recycled effectively. From the above discourse, someone's role as civilians of earth and that of government is quite interdependent and significant, when comes to reducing the amount of
waste
being produced. Punitive measures from the government are the needs of the hour, to tackle
this
issue, so as to ensure rather envisage, a cleaner and habitable planet earth.
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