Towns and cities are attractive places. Some people suggest that the government should spend money putting in more works of art like paintings and statues to make them better to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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Nowadays, many
art
decorations
such
as paintings and statues have been placed in the communities to make cities more attractive. While some people think more money should be allocated in
such
an action, I cannot fully accept that. On the one hand, the investment in putting more artworks could highly improve the quality of the environment of the city.
Instead
of bland streets with infrastructures, residents may feel more pleased living in the community surrounding by beautiful drawings and elegant statues.
For instance
, their leisure time could be spent in the public zone with
art
, which
also
fosters their sense of beauty.
Thus
, people would be benefited to have more works of
art
in their towns.
On the other hand
, decorating the city can hardly be the priority demands of citizens. Rather than accompany with useless status with a high cost for maintenance from taxation, people are more likely to experience improvements in basic but critical needs in daily life
such
as roads renew and school establishment. Take Taipei as a good example,
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overnment has found that citizens are no longer interested in the artworks in the city but focusing on the issues like traffic congestion which directly influences them.
Thus
, the money should spend
firstly
on those which citizens care about the most in the
first
place. In conclusion, I believe the government should just build a moderate number of works of
art
but emphasis the fundamental problems.
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