Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A fraction of the population holds the notion that, at present, children get more spare

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for any

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propound and try to arrive at a rational conclusion. In

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technology-driven world, arguably, pupils are in

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highly competitive. They need consistent practice in their

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to be successful in the rat-race.

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, futuristic subjects like science, maths, information technology and so on play a pivotal role in making fruitful future to them.

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, undoubtedly, nowadays most of the juveniles spend their valuable

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on gadgets make them

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and obese. So, some people argue that children should focus only on

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ursuit of learning.

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credentials play a vital role in a child's life, it's important for them to spend

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with their peer groups, it resulted in mental and physical fitness of a child.

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, undoubtedly, it paves the way to improve many of other skills like social skills, creativity, critical thinking,

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skills etc.

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, many a parent pressurises their children beyond their cognitive abilities would not only stymie their innate abilities but make them

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mentally

depressed as well.

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of child

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, are dramatically increasing nowadays mainly due to the depression among

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younger ones

. Apart from that, suicides among the children

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becoming an unsurprising thing. The advent of technology has

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a new window of opportunity for the children, they no longer have to feel aversion for reading on printed study materials. Internet is a blessing for the pupils who are in pursuit of reading. They can spend their

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usefully for reading. Amazon kindle is an epitome. In short, there are many ways for

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children to spend their

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successfully. Younger one's wishes and inhibitions should not be overlooked. Children could spend their spare

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with their peer groups by playing any outdoor games, or they can spend

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to improve their creativity and passions.