Some people believe that children are given too much free time. They feel that this time should be used to do more school work. How do you think children should spend their free time? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

A fraction of the parents

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their children beyond their

cognivitive

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cognitive

abilities by forcing them to study in their spare

time

as well.

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essay is in disagree with

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scenario and tries to propound some leisure

time

activities for the juveniles. In

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highly competitive world, arguably,

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academic

credentials drive greater importance in making

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younger

generations successful to a great extent. Even though,

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very important for them to take a break from all the hectic situations to be relaxed and energetic.

First

and foremost, peer groups have a pivotal role in a student's life. They should find

time

to play any outdoor games with

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.

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in turn makes them physically as well as mentally fit.

Moreover

, they could acquire skill sets like social skills, communication skills,

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skills,

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competitive

skills and so on.

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, in

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world, it has opened many

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of opportunities for the pupils to sharpen their innate abilities and

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it is a blessing for the children who are in pursuit of reading.

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,

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mazon kindle is an e-learning software with millions of books. Pupils no longer have to read on hard copies. They could enjoy their reading on

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.

Furthermore

, parents should encourage the children to spend their spare

time

with family

also

. It not only improves family bonding but his

self esteem

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as well. Apart from that, for a children family is the key to

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ruitful future. So they could make a better environment for their offsprings to develop their inhibits, or else eventually children become depressed. Nowadays child

psychyatrists

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psychiatrists

are on increase is an epitome for the parents

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unawareness

awareness

of their child's inhibitions. In short, spending spare

time

in a useful way is important in children's life. Their today determines how they are going to be in the future. The advantages that acquire from leisure

time

activities should not be overlooked. Today's children are

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tomorrow's future. So it is important to make their life more qualitative.