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Many elderly people are not long looked after by their families but are put in care homes or nursing homes. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

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Nowadays people are getting more selfish in
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ase of human relations especially
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ounger generation.one of the common trends which
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 remained unchanged for a past decade is elderly people being placed in nursing homes.
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this
 approach. there are several reasons for which many people choose to send their parents to retirement homes.
Firstly
 some people think that they are busy with their careers and are not able to pay any attention
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 their parents. While some others think that their parents would be an economic burden for them. They
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moves their old parents to sach home without realising their feelings so as to make their own lives perfect and peaceful.A lot of old people who lives in
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 facility feels lonely and desperate, as they think that their families do not love them anymore and after leaving, their relatives rarely or never
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 them.
On the other hand
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 exactly
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pposite.They really
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 about their parents and gives enough respect. There express their extreme love and affections as parents were the ones who raised them.Parents raise their children from the stage of infancy till the adolescence, under their unconditional care and nourishment.They even used to stay awake at night times when the children
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 ill, by feeding and comforting them.It is undeniable that parents play an important role
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 the successful life of many young people.
Therefore
 young people should never forget their parents and must take good care of them. To summarise, despite all the merits of retirement homes like better care for
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lderly,it is
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 important to consider that they
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 have disadvantages like feelings of loneliness and poor health conditions.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Professional care
  • Medical attention
  • Trained staff
  • Social interaction
  • Combat loneliness
  • Safety and security
  • Relief for families
  • Loss of autonomy
  • Emotional impact
  • Cost
  • Financial strain
  • Quality of care
  • Neglect and abuse
  • Detachment from family
  • Mental wellbeing
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