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Children in many countries are eating more fast food and convenience snacks. Why are children doing this and hoxw serious are the consequences?

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In the
resent
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 years, fast
food
have
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became
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 a part of our daily routine, especial with children.
Although
 junk
food
do
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 not necessary for us, more and more children eat it
everyday
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. There
are
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 a lot of reason for
this
 problem.
To begin
 with, the most vital factors is lack of
parents's
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 care for their child. They always focus on their work and do not mind
about
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their children's mess.
For example
, almost parents
who
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 I know have
a
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busy work usually give money for their child to buy fast
food
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as a result
 they do not have enough time to prepare homemade
food
.
Futhermore
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Furthermore
, nowadays,
unthealthy
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unhealthy
food
 is
producted
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produced
quicky
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quickly
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 and widely. Children can buy it everywhere with the cheapest cost.
For instance
, dried chicken only
take
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 3 USD and it is delicious. Not
suprisingly
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surprisingly
 that fast
food
have
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n
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egative effect on children's health.
Fisrt
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First
 of all, children can
lost
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 their weight if they eat junk
food
everyday
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. And the cause is they will overweight.
Next
, some scientists
belive
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believe
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 that fast
food
 is the most important things that cause lazy
in
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children. As
e
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lement in unhealthy
food
contain
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 factors that
damege
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damage
 to children. In conclusion, I think parents should more take care of their children's mess by cooking at home and preparing
food
 for children. It not only protect your children's health but
also
improve
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 feelings of family.
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