SOME PEOPLE SAY THAT THE MAİN ENVİROMENTAL PROBLEM OF OUR TIME IS THE LOSS OF PARTICULAR SPECIES OF PLANTS AND ANIMALS.OTHERS SAY THAT THERE ARE MORE ENVIRONMENTAL PROBLEMS DISCUSS BOTH THESE VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION

We are living in a world that environmental problems have started to become more serious and real.
Accordingly
, human beings have realized its consequences in their daily lives.
However
, while many of them claim that destruction of biodiversity is the primary concern about
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nvironment, oppositions argue that other problems like global warming should be addressed at
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.I support the
first
group to some extent and I will outline my view in
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iversity of plants and animals have been decreasing day by day.There is a perfect balance in nature with many elements and every
species
make up an indispensable part of
this
ecologic balance.
Although
tiny little insects have a great impact on nature.For
this
reason, even
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isappearance of one
species
break the balance and start the knock-on effect on
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nvironment without realization.
For example
,loss of plant decreases the production of oxygen which is very crucial for global warming.
Moreover
, it may have
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mpact on animals which eat these plants.
On the other hand
,there are people who support the idea that environmental problems
such
as drought or melting glaciers are more serious than
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extinction of
species
.
However
,it should be realized that they are linked with
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oss of
species
.They should be regarded as consequences of problems which are mentioned above.
For instance
, when plants commence
to disappear
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,the productivity of soil decline which leads to drought. In conclusion, there are many environmental problems which should be managed immediately.
However
, it should be realized that all these problems are connected with others and loss of
species
form the basis of the problems.By taking measures about
this
, we can ease a lot of problems at the same time
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