A year ago, you lent your favorite book to a friend who you thought would enjoy it. Unfortunately, your friend has forgotten to return it. The book has sentimental value to you as it had been presented by your grandmother. Write a letter to your friend. In the letter: ask how he or she is doing remind him / her about the book explain why you need it back

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Dear Rani, Hope you doing great. It has been almost a year since we

last

met.

Last

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time when we spoke you told me about your new job. You said that you will be moving to

Calfornia

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California

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with your son. I hope now you must have settled in your new flat? I am sorry that I lost touch since I was busy with my parent's health issues. If you remember,

last

year you had borrowed a book, which was given by my grandmother. You were very overwhelmed because it consisted of patriotic poems written by Sarojini Naidu. I know you are very fond of writing poems that are related to

nation

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and freedom fighters.

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, when you read those poems your excitement jumped to the

level. When you left, we could not meet. And I knew that you must be extremely busy coping

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challenges of a new job and city. Now you are in a better situation, could please return that book. Actually, it was gifted by my grandmother. She was a fighter pilot and that book was given to her as a tribute during the retirement ceremony.

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, want to keep it very safely and later on

this

our

generation. I am sure that you will understand my feelings and if possible can you courier at my home address. Actually, these days I am working from home because of COVID, I can easily receive it. I think you have my address or else I can email you my address. Warm Wishes, Shreya

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

256 words

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