In Some Areas Of The US Teenagers Are Not Allowed To Be Out Of Doors After a Particular Time At Night.

Violating government law is been a fashionable trend among teenagers. In certain palaces in the US,
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urfew is imposed, young adults are not allowed to step out of their door unless they are accompanied by a mature person. I totally agree with
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law reduces unnecessary gathering at public places and
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reduces illegal activities.
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and the foremost reason for imposing a curfew on the certain region in the US will avoid gathering at public places. Mostly, teenagers are the one who likely to party throughout the
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, small meetings with their friends near to their houses and public places will make a fuss for the neighbourhood and locals.
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teenagers are not allowed to move out of their houses after 11pm.
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, illegal activities will tend to occur mostly during dark hours. Buying, Selling and consuming drugs will happen if strict rules are not passed after the particular time of the
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, a recent survey in England by drug department says that drug dealers are more active at midnight and attract innocent young lives to involve in criminal activities by inducing drugs to them without their concern. In Conclusion, one has to follow the rules inflicted by the government irrespective of their ages. Somehow, regulating time at
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for the teenagers will surely have a positive impact on
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society as well as their personal growth.

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  • safeguarding
  • nighttime crimes
  • risky behaviors
  • proactive approach
  • infringe
  • independence
  • social development
  • resource-intensive
  • disproportionately
  • discrimination
  • unjust profiling
  • juvenile delinquency
  • community programs
  • constructive alternatives
  • aimless wandering
  • enactment
  • nuanced application
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