Your friend's dog has recently passed away. Write a letter to console your friend. In your letter: Express your sympathy Include memories you have about the dog Invite your friend to do something with you.

Dear John, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to empathize with you on the sudden demise of your beloved pet " Casper". I really cannot believe that Casper is not among us as I have met him
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of days back at your house. In fact, it is a huge loss to you and your family. I can imagine your pain and suffering as you have loved him the most. I could not come to your place because of a few official commitments, but my condolences are with you in
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time we have spent with Casper. I recall once, when I was playing ball with him
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your lawn, he was furious and quick at catching up
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ball. As we all have fond memories
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him, I would suggest
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the good old days rather than grieving
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his passing. I want to cheer you up so I have planned a get together
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at my house. We would start the day off by playing badminton, treat you with barbecue snacks followed by watching your favourite movie Avengers. I am really excited to meet you. Write back soon!
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