some people say that museum should be free, whereas others opine that some entry fee should be there.Discuss both side and give your opinion.

There is no doubt that musem attracts both local people and scholars. While proponents of the entry fees argue that

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can use,

instead

of the government subsidies, the opposite group believe that it is unnecessary and everyone allows to visit at a free of cost. In my opinion, I firmly support the former standpoint as they can become financially independent. On the one side, advocates of entry fees argue that the amount can be utilized for the smooth functioning of the

museum

itself and I agree with

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view.

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is because normally the government may not have

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extra funding to channelise for the development of

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infrastructure. Due to

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, if money collects visitors in the form of tickets, can contribute to its own advancement. For example, maintenance of artefacts, payment of curators, installing

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urveillance system and so on can be paid by

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;

therefore

, the supporters think that

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payment is beneficial.

On the other hand

, opponents of the above-mentioned argument think that by charging fees to enter the

museum

, would limit the number of visitors.

In other words

, only affluent people could afford the charge and common public move away from

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establishment. Eventually,

for instance

, students, research fellows and like-minded people may encounter financial issues to enter here.

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public property,

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injustice action ,

moreover

, creating a compartment in society. In conclusion,

although

there are some people consider that all visitors must be ticketed, the opponents view that it is unnecessary, In my opinion, I personally believe that charging from

museum

lovers is must because the amount can be utilized for the betterment of

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institution. It is highly recommended that

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the authority determines how to handle the financial requirement of the

museum

.