Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world. Some people think that this cannot be changed, while others believe actions can be taken to bring about a change. discuss both and give your opinion

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is one of the most dominant issues that people can conduce toward to create an abominable impact. Some individual

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that

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cannot be stopped, whereas, others persuaded that possible to make provision for changing. In my opinion, human activities give rise to the extinction of species, yet it is contingent that can be better via

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overnment`s legislation. On the one hand, it could argue that never do human activities stopped to

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their aliments.

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, every human has access to basic needs

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as food or clothes from plants and animals.

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ainforest that enormous areas were cut down for construction and preparing to the paper by the number of people.

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, another cardinal problem is overpopulation that escalating community can become ground for decreasing natural resources. There is no doubt that as inhabitants propagate,

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the meantime there

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cause to decrease

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natural resources

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as water, increasing pollutant, deforestation.

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, human`s actions are

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ause of loss of biodiversity. In no way does exterminate to

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nvironment`s flora and fauna for human`s desires.

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, by means of making acceptable legislation

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we can handle like these adverse problems and creating more merits. If people and especially women decline to wear fur or leather garments, we will

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minimize the effect of reducing on animals. In

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, we have access to distinctive sources

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of wood that using rainforest by

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bring about deforestation. My own view is that, if

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overnment should gain control over relevant extinct animals and plants, we will have to chance to overcome problems step by step. In conclusion,

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continuous exploitation to the environments by humans for

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the need, Some decisions and modifies like opt to discrepancy resources, declining meat for feed , we will

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balanced for the biodiversity.