Some people who have been in prison become good citizens later. Some people think that having these people to give a talk to school students is the best way to tell them about dangers of committing a crime. Do you agree or disagree.

Crime

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education

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has always been

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mportant part of school

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, but still

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there is a debate going on about the best

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of teaching. While ex-prisoners who became good citizens could be good teachers by

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transferring

their real-life experience, it is

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argued that it might not be the best

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of

crime

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prevention.

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could be just one

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of

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and students should be educated from other resources, like parents, teachers and

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social media, which they are in contact every day anyhow.

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analysis will be conducted reflecting on why lectures of ex-criminals are not the best

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of

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education

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, it is true that once wrongdoer could become valuable citizens and that their message can create

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ivid example of living life on the other side of

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aw. But

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those stories could even be inspiring for young people. For

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instance

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some of

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x-criminals could be

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enormously

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charismatic

in describing their previous life and the

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of their telling could be inspiring to teenagers who are already in ages when they are more likely to get in risky situations. If these stories are delivered in an ambiguous

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, ex-criminals could even

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become

became

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heroes

of some group of teenagers.

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is obviously

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outcome and consequences of

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possible side effect should be seriously taken into account. Curators of these kinds of educational programmes ought to be aware of

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fact and they

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ought to do a fine-grained selection of possible ex-criminal candidates as teachers.

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, it is of

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paramount importance that family is involved in the process of educating their kids from the early ages of their life. Parents who are leading by positive example, are good role models for their kids in an unambiguous

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, kids

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surrounded

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parents are less likely to even be in a situation to commit a

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. For

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reason

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it is quite reasonable to state that

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family

has a huge responsibility in

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prevention and

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it might be even the most important unit of society among those responsible

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decrising

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decreasing

overall tendency and probability of

commiting

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committing

a

crime

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. To summarise, it has been

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discussed

why ex-offenders are not considered the best nor the only source of

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aimed

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preventing

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crime

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.

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Although

their real-life experience could

potentinally

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potentially

be useful, it might

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be counterproductive.

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way

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of teaching should not be completely abandoned but it might be used as

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dditional source of

education

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. Called the most important cell of society with reason, the family should have the main and the most important role in

crime

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prevention,

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other, complementary ways of preventions.