The number of people suffering from the health problems caused by a modern lifestyle which cannot be treated with modern medicines. Some people believe that alternative medicine can help. Do you agree that alternative medicines are effective?

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Many diseases like cancer,heart diseases and others have become widespread in nations around the world.
Although
, there has been a tremendous development in a medical healthcare system,
however
, many ailments are having no reliable
allophatic
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allopathic
drugs for its cure. I believe, there is no other way of combating these diseases rather than taking precautions.
Firstly
, being habitual to
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modern medicine could lead to drastic long-term side effects,
thus
increasing the trouble for the
one
. To
further
explain, while going through the treatment of
one
health issue with those modern medicines, it can be a cause of other organ malfunction, as well as
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igher cost of living.
For instance
, while going through the chemotherapy,
one
of my friends lost all the hair on his head and lost his weight beyond the desired
one
.
Secondly
, consuming any kind of foreign antidote weakens the immune system of a living being,
thus
making him hotspot for many other health problems.Especially, when the latest medicines are considered, they have proven to be extremely dangerous for the human body defence system.
In addition
to
this
, excessive use of drugs could have a genetic mutation as its consequence.
One
clear example is
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new anti-depression tablets which absolutely, kills the Red Blood cells,
thus
exposing the person to various infections. To conclude, we must ponder upon avoiding the usage of these new era medicines to avoid being a victim for other disorders.
Moreover
, we should try being in good health by doing workouts which is key to enhance the metabolism, clearly, said that "prevention is better than care".
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