The government should not waste money on arts as the same money would be better spent on p projects like sanitation or infrastructure. Do you agree to this statement

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government

have to on

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ood way, the area of investment should be in future help the country to grow. It is disagreed to spent the

money

in

art

instead

of projects

,

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or invest the same value of

money

in these two fields. The

government

sources of income need to

ssess

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assess

in the

roject

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project

that supports the high quality of life, as well as the

art

is not promising.

Fistly

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, there

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multiple ways to spent the

money

to increase economy incomes, the sources of incomes need to possess the time and energy from the

government

to result in

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feedback the good return.

For example

, if the country

own

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special land with rare

vegtables

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vegetables

grow on it,

then

aid by no limitation of

money

, tools and farmer

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therefore

to export

this

product to the whole world

consequently

the economy will rise

as a result

of

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ight way to invest. The power points and strong chances need to consider to invest to surely get

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positive return.

Secondly

, the area of

art

have

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many

disadvantage

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to spent the

money

and energy on it , many kinds of

art

likewise

music and

threater

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theatre

have the lowest attractive of people due to the artiest work harder than anyone

alse

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else

and get less than what they deserve

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For

insteance

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instance

, many of people looking in the

art

as

leuxury

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luxury

and entertainment without taking a serious work so there is no

benifit

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benefit

benefits

behind it,

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the

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another

issues

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is the

musiums

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museums

museum

cost a lot of

money

with no a huge

benifit

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benefit

in back. The lose of human

resourse

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resource

resources

in

this

feild

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field

and place to present

this

sort of

art

with huge return make

this

feild

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field

not promising to spent

money

on it. To sum up, the

government

have to look for the strong ability and

incourge

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encourage

encouraged

their people to work on it to increase the power of incomes and provide the rich generation in few

next

years of working harder in

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ood source. The spent of

money

should be in

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ight place and time, in project help to grow the economy

rether

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rather

than

art

. In conclusion

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the human resources for each region need to by notice and give them the

reseaon

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reason

to be

produtive

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productive

towrd

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toward

thier

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their

the

country to have a worthy dynasty.