Modern technology is changing our world. This has advantages such as bringing people closer together through communication. It also has disadvantages such as destroying the differences between cultures. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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Our world has been changed enormously by modern
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. Where the different modes of communication brought people closer to each other,
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is destroying the cultural differences as well.
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, I believe that there are more positives than negatives that
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can bring. I will explain both in the following paragraphs. There are a plethora of advantages of
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, learning has become very convenient through it. People who have any disability, or not allowed to go out from their homes, can now easily gain knowledge about several fields, just on one click.
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, it keeps the works running. In
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if the factories were closed and would not use
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to operate, we were sure to die with hunger. If the work would stop,
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the countries would fall with a very critical condition, but
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keeps everybody alive. As where is light, there is dark as well;
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,
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has some disadvantages if used by the culprit mind people. The misuse of
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can be disastrous.
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, it can be used for making atomic bombs and/or fatal viruses that
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the ability to finish
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hole human breed. To conclude,
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Is made to brighten our future, if it will be used for
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purpose only
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there is no question regarding its advantages and disadvantages for us; but if it goes in wrong hands of evil-minded people,
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there is no solution for that as well.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • revolutionize communication
  • global relationships
  • cultural exchange
  • cultural homogenization
  • diminish traditions
  • uniform global culture
  • cultural elements
  • dilute traditions
  • dominant languages
  • marginalizing
  • communication tools
  • cultural preservation
  • intercultural connectivity
  • cultural identity
  • cultural diversity
  • positive and negative outcomes
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