Many people believe that social networking sites (such as Facebook) have had a huge negative impact on both individuals and society. To what extent do you agree ?

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Today we have a lot of different social networking sites

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as Facebook, Twitter, Instagram and so on.

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, we have various point of view, some users think that social media can give a bad effect on us.

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, others prefer to believe that social networking sites have had a positive impact on people. On one hand, people believe that public networks have had a huge negative influence on society

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, social media platforms take a lot of points. How you can waste time?

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, you can kill your generation after looking and scrolling different posts and photos. You did not realise that you wasting life after nothing special and you did not understand how much time has passed. Starting from

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, it can be a huge issue if all humanity will be depended on social networks. Because of

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, it can affect our work efficiency, quality and so on.

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, society who prefer to live near with public networks. It means that they know how is working social platforms and what are they needed for. According to

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, we use social media for chatting and talking with our friends and other people. It can help to be aware of news, inventions and so on. Some of the posts can teach and learn something new. To conclusion, I comprehend both opinions of benefits social networking sites.

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, I basically agree with people who believe in a positive effect on society and individuals. But if we prefer

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side, we should not to be chained to social media.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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erosion
face-to-face
interactions
privacy concerns
data breaches
misinformation
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cyberbullying
online harassment
procrastination
productivity
social isolation
dissemination
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