Some people view teenage conflict with their parents as a necessary part of growing up, whilst others see it as something negative which should be avoided. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

In general, the adolescence period is expected to be the most challenging one for both parents and their children.

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some people are against the conflict and see the avoidance of it as a solution, the opposing members of society consider it as an essential part for

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ersonal development of teenagers. I share the

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of the latter approach. The ones who deny the importance of the conflict, explain their attitude by giving examples for the consequences of problematic relationships with family members,

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as starting negative habits like smoking, drinking alcohol, etc.

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, they insist that having some sort of arguments with parents may lead the teens to depression. People, who support the idea of positive approach towards the conflict, argue that by being able to persuade their parents (fathers and mothers) these children (juniors) are being taught to defend their

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in front of other members of society.

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of those high-tension discussions, self-esteem levels of teenagers(youngsters) increase and

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eventually pave the way for

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better personal development. In my view,

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helps them to clarify their own

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on some issues and come up with better solutions for the problems (difficulties) they face

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, it urges them to gain some extra skills and abilities for appropriate decision making. In a nutshell, growing up with the allowance of expressing

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is supposed to be the most efficient and effective way for avoiding problems

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communications. In order not to face with problems(challenges) relating

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, parents(adults) should be prepared for the arguments and sometimes bear the extraordinary

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of their children.