You have recently read a book about a city you know well and found some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author. In your letter tell him/her of the incorrect information give him/her the correct information explain why they should correct it.

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Dear Raj sir , Hope
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letter finds you well.I am writing
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letter to express my concern regarding the incorrect facts present in your book "The History Of Agra". I am an ardent follower of your books and have always appreciated them.Yesterday , I finished reading the newly published book and found two incorrect information in it .The river name on the bank on which the Taj Mahal is built is not correct and why it was built is
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not true. I have been a resident of Agra since my birth and know the history of Agra very well so would like to pass the correct data to you about the Taj Mahal.It was built on the bank of river Yamuna and built by Shah Jahan to show his love for his beloved wife Mumtaaz.
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, your books are published everywhere in the world and they are admired by a huge number of the population .It would be really appreciated if you correct the facts and re-publish the book so that the wrong information is not passed to everyone. Thank you for your understanding! Looking forward to your response. Yours sincerely, Payal Khandelwal

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coherence and cohesion
Make sure to separate your ideas more clearly. Each paragraph should ideally focus on one main idea to improve the clarity of your message.
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Although you provided some good information, elaborating a bit more on the significance of the correction would strengthen your argument.
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Your letter has a polite tone and expresses appreciation for the author's work, which is commendable.
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You clearly identified the errors in the book and provided correct information, which addresses the main task effectively.
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