Some people believe that success in life comes from hard work and determination, while others think that there are more important factors such as money and appearance. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Dedication and determination play a crucial role in making a

person

successful in life, but many people argue that wealth and how you look are more vital elements.

This

essay agrees that

one

's accomplishments are based on efforts and sacrifices a

person

makes to achieve his desired goals. Appearance and

money

are secondary what matters is the journey of ups and downs

one

goes through with the will of never giving up. It is a common opinion that

money

play's a necessary role but is not a prerequisite, a good illustration of

this

is many big names in the industry who started with pennies but are making millions now. Rich people do not like to show off their wealth

instead

they reinvest their

money

to make them richer, so they do not care how they look. What matters to them is their knowledge, experience and skills through which they are making a fortune. I am convinced that if a

person

sets a goal and keep moving forward no matter how tough the situation is, he/she will definitely achieve their targets. A good illustration of

this

is Amazon, the founder started it in his garage and is making losses in its initial years, but with his unbreakable passion and belief made him the richest

person

in the world today.

Money

is required for many things

hence

everyone thinks

one

cannot do anything without it, but the reality is the opposite.

Similarly

,people confuse

one

's appearance to judge them how wealthy they are. To put it another way,

this

generation believes in materialism

instead

of relationships.

This

is shown by the fact that many people have the ideology that people will not talk to them if their appearance is not attractive or right, which is wrong. To conclude I would say that the key to success is to hustle and make you way up to the top and for

this

what you need is do not give up attitude and your passion. The

money

will follow you if you follow the right path not if you will let yourself stuck in any situation.