Last month, you travelled to another city. You told a friend who lives in the city that you would meet them, but you did not. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter apologise for not meeting him/her explain why you did not contact him/her earlier suggest a time and place to meet in the future

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Dear Jake, I hope

this

letter finds you well. I'

writing

this

letter to tell you the reason and apologise for not meeting you

last

month when I'

visted

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visited

visit

Sydney

. I'

terribly sorry

not

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for not

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meeting you on that day, things

are went

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as I planned.

Otherwise

, we would have a drink together.

Last

month when I planned a

bussiness

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business

trip to

sydney

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Sydney

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, things are not good in both states. I'

sure you know that due to the pandemic, no one

allowed

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is allowed

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to cross

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cross

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crossing

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the borders without special

permissions

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permission

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. I got special permission for only three days to stay in New South Wales state. I lost my phone when I'

on my way to

sydney

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Sydney

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and

luckly

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luckily

I organised everything with

client

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the client

a client

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through emails. I can't contact you because I don't have your email Id.

Otherwise

, I would inform you about my busy schedule and my

help less

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helpless

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situation to meet you. After November, when borders are open, I will plan a trip to

Sydney

again.

This

time only to meet you and our friends. What

you

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do you

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think about new year eve. I will be there on December 28 th and will spend

some

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good time with you. Eagerly waiting to meet you. Regards Dheeraj

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3Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
2Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
15Grammar mistakes
 

6 paragraphs

203 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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