Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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Technology
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changed the way we live in
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modern world. Communication, entertainment, education, working environments are greatly influenced by the evolution of
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. Availability of
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nternet become so easy and affordable which make everyone access it. A lot of people opine that
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is not a good development while others think it is a necessary development. I,
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, believe it is a great achievement and a much needed for today world and I will explain why in
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essay with some examples. Can you imagine a single day our lives without internet? It is not at all possible. Internet, mobiles, social media everything become a part of our lives and our routines are connected with them. For the
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decade offices and schools are become
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to none in adopting the
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. Employees started working from home, students are learning everything by sitting in their study room. These facilities are making employees avoid travel long distances, work more effectively, manage personal life much more efficiently. Students can learn whatever they want, they can enjoy the est of the day with their family and friends.
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gives them
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to gain other skills and explore their interests and strengths. Recent situations across glode demanding
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trend much stronger than ever. The spread of COVID, lockdown in all countries to control it's outrage make use of
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mandatory to complete any work.
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enowned IT company, he used to travel two hours daily to reach office and spent very less
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with his family. Now due to
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andemic situation, he started work from home. He started working more efficiently than before and now he got a lot of
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to spend some
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with his family. Thanks to
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possible because it is affordable for everyone.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • telecommuting
  • work-life balance
  • environmental impact
  • socio-economic background
  • face-to-face interaction
  • interpersonal skills
  • productivity
  • reliable technology
  • quality of education
  • flexible schedule
  • cost savings
  • commuting
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