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Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

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Technology
 changed the way we live in
this
 modern world. Communication, entertainment, education, working environments are greatly influenced by the evolution of
technology
. Availability of
technology
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nternet become so easy and affordable which make everyone access it. A lot of people opine that
this
 is not a good development while others think it is a necessary development. I,
however
, believe it is a great achievement and a much needed for today world and I will explain why in
this
 essay with some examples. Can you imagine a single day our lives without internet? It is not at all possible. Internet, mobiles, social media everything become a part of our lives and our routines are connected with them. For the
last
 decade offices and schools are become
second
 to none in adopting the
technology
. Employees started working from home, students are learning everything by sitting in their study room. These facilities are making employees avoid travel long distances, work more effectively, manage personal life much more efficiently. Students can learn whatever they want, they can enjoy the est of the day with their family and friends.
This
 gives them
time
 to gain other skills and explore their interests and strengths. Recent situations across glode demanding
this
 trend much stronger than ever. The spread of COVID, lockdown in all countries to control it's outrage make use of
technology
 mandatory to complete any work.
For example
, my friend works in
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enowned IT company, he used to travel two hours daily to reach office and spent very less
time
 with his family. Now due to
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andemic situation, he started work from home. He started working more efficiently than before and now he got a lot of
time
 to spend some
time
 with his family. Thanks to
technology
,
this
 possible because it is affordable for everyone.
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